I'm posting this review because the article brings to a head some of the most important issues in modern historical analysis. I'll add to it as I get time.
The article was written by Spencer Kraus, a researcher for Book of Mormon Central, and was published in the Interpreter, here:
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As an overview, I had read a variety of opinions and studies about the text of the Book of Mormon. Many LDS scholars have focused on connections/similarities between the King James Version (KJV) and the text of the Book of Mormon.
Some scholars think Joseph didn't really translate anything but instead merely read words that appeared on the stone-in-the-hat (SITH). Some think those words originated in the 16th or 17th century because they have elements of Early Modern English. Some think Joseph composed the text with the help of Sidney Rigdon or Oliver Cowdery, or copied it from the novel by Solomon Spalding. Some think Joseph dictated the text as a performance.
Lately, I can't find many scholars who believe Joseph actually translated the engravings on the plates.
Even our Gospel Topics Essay quotes lots of sources and theories but never once quotes what Joseph and Oliver said, repeatedly, about Joseph translating the plates with the Urim and Thummim.
When I surveyed the literature, I noticed that people have simply assumed that the KJV language in the text came from or was influenced by the KJV. But what about the non-KJV language?
Some have found similarities between The Late War and other "pseudo-biblical" books. In response, some apologists argued that Joseph never read those books because there is no record that he did. That strikes me as unrealistic. Instead, I surmised that if Joseph translated the plates as he claimed, then like any translator, he would have used his own lexicon. Thus, evidence of composition is also evidence of translation.
I explored what resources were available to Joseph Smith to build his lexicon. I expanded the analysis beyond the Book of Mormon to Joseph's other writings and revelations. Eventually, this led to the Jonathan Edwards connection.
For me, this is a faith-affirming interpretation. I see God preparing Joseph from a young age for his role as translator and prophet. It also corroborates the teachings of the prophets about God's hand in the events leading up to the restoration.
Others see it differently, which is fine with me.
Because I agree with President Nelson that "good inspiration is based upon good information," I encourage people to make informed decisions with all the available information.
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For an introduction to the Jonathan Edwards idea, you can start here:
https://www.mobom.org/jonathan-edwards
Although I mentioned this database in my book, it is a work in progress. At the Mormon History Association in Logan in June 2022, I announced the release of a working copy of the Nonbiblical Intertextuality Database here:
https://www.mobom.org/nonbiblical-intertextuality-database
Brother Kraus didn't have access to this database. I would have gladly shared it with him had he asked, of course, but he has never contacted me about anything.
Now, everyone can see the data for themselves.
The table of contents lists the words/phrases in alphabetical order.
Here are examples of terms/phrases in the database starting with A.
Contents
Nonbiblical BofM terms unique
Sources:
a decree” [send]
a good gift”
a house of prayer”
abhorrence
Abound in good works”
Abounding in good works
Abridgment
Abyss
According to the great”
according to the spirit”
according to their [own] wills”
Accountable
act for himself”
act for themselves”
Acted”
Admonitions
Affectionate”
affections of”
Affixed
against the wicked”
Aggravating
Agony of [his] [my] soul
Agreeable to
all are alike”
all are fallen
all eternity”
all hopes”
all manner of abominations”
all manner of iniquity”
all manner of wickedness”
All my days”
All our happiness”
all the might”
all your might”
allotted”
almighty power”
Alteration
always rejoice”
among the wicked”
an account hereafter
an account of their”
an account of”
Analysis of D&C 10:55-56
“kingdom of God”
“inherit the kingdom of God”
“kingdom of heaven”
inherit the kingdom of heaven
“kingdom of the devil”
grasp
and so forth”
Anguish of soul
Answer(ed) the end(s)
Anxiety
Anxious
anxiously”
Appease
Appendages
apply the atoning blood”
are expedient”
arise from the dust
arm(s) of his love”
arm(s) of mercy”
Arraigned
ascended into heaven”
ascension”
Assistance”
At the bar
Atonement of his blood
Atoning [blood] [sacrifice]”
Attempt
Attended with”
attitude”
aught/ought”
Awaken
Awful
Awful bar
Awful hell
awful is”
awful situation”
Awful state
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My interlinear comments follow.
Jonathan Edwards’s Unique Role
in an Imagined Church History
Review of Jonathan Neville, Infinite Goodness: Joseph Smith, Jonathan Edwards, and the Book of Mormon. Salt Lake City: Digital Legends Press, 2021. 339 pages. $22.99 (paperback).
Abstract: This is the second of two papers reviewing Jonathan Neville’s latest books on the translation of the Book of Mormon. In Infinite Goodness, Neville claims that Joseph Smith’s vocabulary and translation of the Book of Mormon were deeply influenced by the famous Protestant minister Jonathan Edwards. Neville cites various words or ideas that he believes originate with Edwards as the original source for the Book of Mormon’s language.
This is a false assertion. Throughout the book I emphasize that Joseph Smith translated the plates, using his own lexicon while guided by revelation (D&C 9). Edwards was one of several influences on Joseph Smith, just as each of us learns our respective native languages from a variety of influences.
However, most of Neville’s findings regarding Edwards and other non-biblical sources are superficial and weak, and many of his findings have a more plausible common source: the language used by the King James Bible.
This is a bizarre framing because the entire nonbiblical intertextual database consists of terms and phrases not found in the King James Bible. Separately, the biblical intertextual database includes several examples of rephrasing and blending of biblical passages that are found in the works of Edwards, suggesting Edwards was a closer source than the KJV itself .
Neville attempts to make Joseph a literary prodigy, able to read and reformulate eight volumes of Edwards’s sermons — with enough genius to do so, but not enough genius to learn the words without Edwards’s help.
This is an imaginative reframing of my argument, as anyone who reads my book can see.
This scenario contradicts the historical record, and Neville uses sources disingenuously to impose his idiosyncratic and wholly modern worldview onto Joseph Smith and his contemporaries.
This is delightful rhetoric. I invite readers to see whether it fairly characterizes my position. It's fun to see the influence of Jonathan Edwards, who lived in the 1700s, characterized as a "wholly modern worldview."
As I have demonstrated in my recent review of A Man That Can Translate,1 Jonathan Neville consistently misuses and misquotes historical sources. He resorts to multiple double standards to force the historical narrative into the shape required by his theories. My previous review responded to his claims that (1) Joseph Smith memorized and recited Isaiah from memory rather than translate it from the Book of Mormon record; (2) Joseph Smith tricked his close friends and family, making them believe that he was translating the [Page 66]aforementioned sections of the Book of Mormon; (3) many witnesses to the Book of Mormon are not to be believed; and (4) we should instead rely on sources hostile to The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints to properly understand Joseph’s translation effort.
I will now respond to Neville’s new hypothesis that Joseph Smith read and studied the teachings of Jonathan Edwards from an early age, ultimately incorporating Edwardsian language into his translation of the Book of Mormon.2
Neville’s portrayal of Edwards and Joseph Smith, however, has much in common with the dubious claim that Joseph was influenced by Emanuel Swedenborg’s ideas about heaven.3 In both cases, the purported similarities are superficial, any connection was unremarked upon by contemporaries (even those who were well acquainted with both works), and more easily explained by a common source shared by both.
As with Swedenborg, Joseph’s supposed reliance on Edwards was unnoticed until the modern era. Indeed, the lack of any early claim that Joseph was influenced by Edwards is significant for a couple of reasons. Edwards’s works were, after all, available in the bookstore of Joseph’s hometown, and they were widely published in the early American republic. The people who would have known Joseph certainly could have talked to those around him — and yet we don’t have anyone claiming such influence, nor do any claim that he was well-versed in Edwards’s writings. By Neville’s own admission there is no “conclusive direct evidence” that he can provide to support any of the claims in his book.4
Instead, says Neville, there are just “probabilities” based on his own (mis)readings of historical sources and his own presuppositions.5 In this review, I will demonstrate how this discussion is another modern manufacture, yet another specimen of the long line of pseudo-historical claims made by Jonathan Neville.6
Joseph’s Literary Capabilities and Perusal of Theology
Central to Neville’s thesis is the assumption that, despite all historical evidence to the contrary, Joseph Smith was well-versed and well-studied in early American Christian theology. However, the sources that Neville uses to substantiate this claim are misused and misunderstood.
Neville argues from a basis of presupposition, making his entire premise flawed when his presupposition is examined with even scant attention to accuracy. Neville repeatedly insists that Joseph had to be aware of and actively study early American theologians, because “it’s difficult to believe” otherwise, and there is “no reason for him to ignore [Page 67]such readily available resources.”7 This is an example of “the argument from personal incredulity” fallacy — the author cannot see how something could not be the case, and so it must have been the case.8 The study of history is partly the process of using sources to expand our understanding of what could or could not be the case to avoid imposing our preconceptions on the past.
Neville often claims that Joseph’s “intimate acquaintance” with Christian denominations in his day must have included a familiarity with Christian writings, claiming that evidence of theologians’ works can be found in Joseph’s writings, translations, and revelations.9 However, such a “common sense” proposition could only make sense if it were to align with the historical record — which Neville fails to demonstrate.10
Neville’s faulty premise begins with the assertion that “in [Joseph’s] early years, due to the leg infection, he did have an unusual amount of free time to read about and contemplate religious topics.”11 This comment is centered around an offhand remark — provoked by Erastus Holmes’s desire to learn more about the Church and its doctrine — from Joseph Smith. Joseph offered “a brief relation of my experience while in my juvenile years, say from 6, years old up to the time I received the first visitation of Angels which was when I was about 14, years old.”12 Neville believes that this statement is key to understanding a great deal about Joseph’s life and upbringing by linking the leg surgery to his immersion in the writings of Edwards. However, an account of one’s youth would be a natural place for anyone to begin a personal history — it is not necessary that this be a prelude to an immersion in Christian theology, or a sign that these events of youth are a key to all that came after.13 (And if Edwards’s works were so important to Joseph’s history, this would be an excellent place to mention them — but he doesn’t.)
Neville argues that in the aftermath of Joseph’s leg surgery and during his stay with his uncle Jesse in Salem, Massachusetts, Joseph Smith was introduced to theological sermons by Samuel Deane geared toward young men. He concludes this based upon common terminology used by Latter-day Saint scripture and Deane. Although Neville notes that “this non-biblical terminology is not exclusive to Deane,” he believes that a few solitary words taken out of context from at least fourteen verses throughout the Book of Mormon and Doctrine and Covenants are evidence that Joseph read Deane’s work. However, just because a single word or phrase appears in multiple sources does not mean that one must have been influenced by the other. Take, for example, the words “enjoyment” or “preface” that appear in 2 Nephi 9:16 [Page 68]and D&C 1:6, respectively.14 Neville links these two words to Deane’s writings, but is it a safe assumption that these words were brought to Joseph’s attention because of Deane’s work? Any rational historian would argue not — using such a low bar for evidence, after all, would mean that virtually any book written in the English language could be considered a smoking gun for outside influence on the text of the Book of Mormon. Such a methodology is fundamentally flawed.
Neville continues to double down on this presupposition by incorporating additional hypotheticals likewise impossible to support. According to Neville, as Joseph Sr. and Lucy Mack Smith taught their children about God, “presumably they would provide reading material,” leading to Joseph’s “intimate acquaintance” with other denominations’ teachings and writings.15 He is unable to provide a single source to explain how Joseph Sr. and Lucy Smith (the latter of which had to pay in scraps of cloth to arrive in Palmyra when they moved) were able to afford such an expansive library of theological treatises, especially given Joseph Sr.’s distrust of organized religion and its ministers.16
Neville also erroneously believes that Joseph’s lengthy recovery from his surgery “compromised [his] usefulness for farm work, leaving him more time to read” after returning to his family and moving to Palmyra.17 Given the Smith’s dire financial situation, however, it is hard to imagine in historical context that this would be a plausible hypothesis. There was plenty of work on a nineteenth-century farm for a young Joseph to engage in despite his disability around the house. Joseph was far more likely to be engaged in helping his family survive than read theological treatises in his supposedly endless spare time. His work in treasure digging and athletic nature, especially his affinity for wrestling, is also evidence that he was not as handicapped as Neville proposes and was accustomed to hard and physical toil.18 This picture of Joseph matches what a twentieth-century child might have experienced, but not the son of poor nineteenth-century farmers — it is classic presentism.
Whatever Joseph’s conditions in New York may have been, he was able to leave the house and perform some errands on his own. Neville cites Orsamus Turner, who recounted one memory of the young Joseph Smith on such an errand:
He was lounging, idle; (not to say vicious,) and possessed of less than ordinary intellect. The author’s own recollections of him are distinct ones. He used to come into the village of Palmyra with little jags of wood, from his backwoods home; sometimes patronizing a village grocery too freely; sometimes [Page 69]find an odd job to do about the store of Seymour Scovell; and once a week he would stroll into the office of the old Palmyra Register, for his father’s paper. How impious, in us young “dare Devils” to once and a while blacken the face of the then meddling inquisitive lounger-but afterwards Prophet, with the old fashioned balls, when he used to put himself in the way of the working of the old fashioned Ramage press! The editor of the Cultivator, at Albany-esteemed as he may justly consider himself, for his subsequent enterprize and usefulness, may think of it, with contrition and repentance; that he once helped, thus to disfigure the face of a Prophet, and remotely, the founder of a State.19
Neville only cites a small portion of the above text dealing with Joseph’s trips to the printing press and having his face blackened.20 Neville attempts to link this incident to an eight-volume set of Jonathan Edwards’s writings on sale in Palmyra at that time, allowing Neville to assert a “plausible” connection between Joseph Smith and the writings of Jonathan Edwards. However, when the statement is read in its full context, it is clear that the author was vehemently opposed to Joseph and the restoration and even believed Joseph to be of less than ordinary intellect. Joseph is similarly reported as “patronizing” a grocer, and he is specifically said to have gotten in the way of the staff running the Ramage press. It appears clear from the context that Orsamus Turner was not referring to Joseph lingering to read from the eight volumes of Jonathan Edwards.
To further cement Neville’s poor analysis and historiography, one need only look at his treatment of Lucy Mack Smith’s history. In Lucy’s 1844 history, she remarks how Joseph “had never read the Bible through by course in his life for Joseph was less inclined to the study of books than any child we had but much more given to reflection and deep study.”21 This was changed slightly in her 1845 history to say Joseph “was much less inclined to the perusals of books” than any other Smith children.22 Neville attempts to take advantage of this slight shift in wording by an appeal to the modern definition of “perusal.” While Neville correctly asserts that perusal is defined in Webster’s 1828 dictionary as “the act of reading,” Neville also fails to mention how the 1828 dictionary also defines it as a “careful view or examination,” acting as a synonym for the word “study.”23 Rather, Neville cites the modern Merriam-Webster dictionary to define perusal as a contranym, a word with a dual meaning. In the modern dictionary, perusal can mean either an intense study or [Page 70]a light reading, which Neville uses to claim that Lucy Mack Smith never challenged the idea that Joseph was well-read as a young boy:
This suggests she meant that the other children’s perusals were more relaxed and informal than Joseph’s “deep study.” This connotation is consistent with her observation that Joseph hadn’t “read the Bible through,” because “meditation and deep study” requires more detailed examination of cross-references and commentaries than merely reading it through.24
The error in using a modern definition in a historical text should be obvious to any reader. This is another form of presentism that Neville incorporates to make his argument more credible, but presentism weakens any argument, no matter how well-crafted. If we want a clue as to Lucy’s meaning, we have only to look at what her original 1844 text said — and it is obvious from that text that Joseph “was less inclined to the study of books.” It is implausible that she meant to completely invert her meaning in 1845 by saying Joseph was really into studying books, but not into casually flipping through them.
Neville’s argument is further weakened when he quotes Lucy saying she “perused the Bible and prayed incessantly” in her 1844 history, clearly meaning she studied the Bible intently.25 Neville’s arguments are weak, and his use of presentism and incompetent use of sources are fatal to his argument.
What, then, should be concluded regarding Joseph Smith’s literacy? According to Emma Smith, Joseph was unable to write or even dictate a well-worded letter26 — a claim Neville tries to dismiss by challenging Emma’s literacy, as though that would make her analysis any less true: “Emma’s own literacy was not exemplary” based on a letter she wrote in 1839 “that is mostly one long continuous sentence.”27 In contrast to Emma, Neville cites George A. Smith, the prophet’s cousin, who recounted how a letter his family received from Joseph circa 1828 that recounted how Christendom was in a state of apostasy led his father to exclaim how Joseph “writes like a prophet.”28 However, one must ask what George A.’s father likely meant — did he believe a prophet should write fluently, precisely, and clearly, or was he more concerned with the theological message contained within the letter, no matter how flawed the spelling and grammar? Given that we have examples of Joseph’s writing from earlier and later in his career — and none of his early work can be said to display great literate sophistication — George A.’s account is unlikely to mean what Neville needs it to say.
[Page 71]The best example close in time to the Book of Mormon is Joseph Smith’s 1832 history (which Neville cites extensively in an appendix).29 Whatever we think of the older Joseph’s literary gifts, young Joseph’s handwritten portion of the 1832 essay is certainly no better than Emma Smith’s 1839 letter that is “mostly one long continuous sentence.” Joseph even admits at the outset of his handwritten portion that he lacked many literary capabilities when he wrote that “as it required their exertions of all that were able to render any assistance for the support of the Family therefore we were deprived of the bennifit of an education suffice it to say I was mearly instructtid in reading and writing and the ground <rules> of Arithmatic which const[it]uted my whole literary acquirements.”30 (Neville conveniently ignores this admission.) Joseph was not well-written in the early days of his ministry, nor was he an academic scholar.31
Edwards as a Proposed Elias Figure
A unique claim Neville makes is that Edwards was an Elias-like figure for the restoration,32 preparing the way for Joseph to perform his work: “Edwards frequently encouraged his listeners and readers to look forward to, and even pray for, the coming prosperity of the Christian church. Again, when seen through young Joseph’s eyes, Edwards suggested, if not foreshadowed, if not predicted, the Restoration.”33
Edwards did indeed discuss how the Church would become great in the latter days, but he does not foreshadow or predict the restoration itself. Statements such as Edwards’s, prophetic as they may seem, are not alone in the voices of his contemporaries who, upon breaking from the Church of England, often looked forward to a time when the Church would again have apostles and prophets. Others had often discussed and hoped for a return to New Testament Christianity and expressed this hope in more detail than Edwards. Neville also spends an entire chapter discussing how Edwards has been, in his view, misrepresented by Latter-day Saint scholars despite Edwards playing such an “essential role” in the restoration.34 However, when analyzed critically, none of the citations that Neville uses demonstrate that Edwards played such an important role.
Neville repeatedly quotes Jonathan Edwards’s use of the word “restoration” to show a “qualitative connection between Jonathan Edwards and Joseph Smith.” Neville notes: “Some people have a different understanding of what Edwards had in mind when he used terms such as ‘restoration.’ In my view, it’s less important what Edwards [Page 72]thought or intended than what his readers have learned from his writing and how they have acted in response.”35
We might first ask what is meant by a “qualitative connection” — is there some quality or characteristic that Edwards and Joseph share? But if so, why need Joseph depend upon Edwards for it? It would hardly be surprising if Joseph and Edwards — both interested in religious issues in the early United States — had some topics or concerns in common. They doubtless shared the quality of being concerned about grace, God, prayer, baptism, and salvation. But this only demonstrates that they were nineteenth century Christians. (And, arguably, such matters have been the preoccupation of most Christians for two millennia.)
When we read our own preoccupations or ideas into a text, scholars term it eisegesis. Neville, who prefers to read Edwards via eisegesis, sees only the broad similarities, not the differences. He fails to note, for example, that nowhere does Edwards hint or imply that he believed in a universal apostasy. The restoration he spoke of was not a restoration of the gospel. Neville points out the obvious when he notes how “Joseph Smith … definitely focused on the latter-day restoration” of lost doctrines and authority,36 but he cannot provide us any connection to Edwards’s teachings of “restoration” which match Joseph’s ideas.
This degree of eisegesis is dangerous — there is certainly merit to the idea that readers have some freedom to respond to and interpret art or writing in ways the creator did not intend, and the resulting so-called reader-response criticism can take on a life of its own and be a subject worthy of study. But if the creator of a work cannot convey any kind of intended meaning, then they would have essentially worked in vain. The author’s intent and content as they understood it is just as important, if not more so, than how we react to it. This is doubly so when doing history.
Neville also argues that Joseph’s 1832 account of the First Vision was influenced by Jonathan Edwards’s teachings regarding the glorious state of the Church.37 However, Joseph Smith never taught about his experience in terms of Edwards’s teachings, and instead recorded how, while he was more open towards Methodism, he generally found no church he could confidently join due to the apparent apostasy that was made evident around him.38
Placing Edwards as an Elias for Joseph Smith is also challenged by Joseph Smith’s lack of direct referral to Edwards throughout his life.39 Jesus Christ often spoke about John the Baptist, pointing out how John was sent to prepare the way, but no such mention appears from [Page 73]Joseph regarding any early American theologian. In fact, the Lord did identify a forerunner to Joseph Smith and the Restoration of the Gospel in D&C 35:4 — Sidney Rigdon. Unlike Jonathan Edwards, Rigdon (a prominent Campbellite minister before his conversion) did believe there had been some apostasy and sought to reclaim New Testament Christianity. The Lord even compares Rigdon to John the Baptist and Elijah, and it is clear, based on the work Rigdon performed in Kirtland as a Campbellite preacher, that the people of the area were prepared to receive the Gospel, causing the Church to flourish once it was introduced to them.40 While the Lord was preparing the world for His gospel before Sidney Rigdon, this fact does not necessitate Edwards as an Elias for Joseph Smith, and Neville is unable to offer any convincing evidence to support his point of view.
Proposed Theological Influences From Jonathan Edwards
Believing that Joseph was well versed in Edwards, Neville believes “there is even evidence Edwards may have influenced Joseph on topics ranging from Book of Mormon geography to the Urim and Thummim and the introduction of plural marriage.”41 This is not unlike other claims made since the publication of the Book of Mormon that attempt — either in good faith or bad — to place certain themes or phrases in a nineteenth century context. Like these other claims, Neville’s hypothesis quickly manifests itself as implausible.42 While I have shown in general terms that Joseph lacked the literary capabilities, means, and opportunity to read and reappropriate Edwards (or any direct evidence of his having done so), this is a lengthy argument and a substantial part of Neville’s theory regarding Jonathan Edwards. Most of what he has to offer, however, is weak and inconclusive — indeed, after a close examination, it can be determined that if Joseph was affected by Jonathan Edwards’s writings, he reacted in the complete opposite to what Neville proposes, countering many of the doctrines proposed by Edwards.
An example of the weak links that Neville draws to Edwards can be seen when Neville attempts to link the 1985 Church hymnbook with a hymnbook used by Edwards because nine of the modern Church’s hymns also appeared in a hymnal compiled by Isaac Watts. Such a strained connection is a weak and untenable strand on which to hang a large role for Jonathan Edwards in the Restoration.43 (Edwards and Joseph might even have sung the same Christmas carols, but that doesn’t mean Joseph got the idea of Christmas from Edwards.) Here, I will focus [Page 74]on various items of doctrinal importance that Neville attempts to link to Jonathan Edwards.
Prayer
Neville compares 2 Nephi 32:8 with Edwards’s teachings that the natural man wants to avoid prayer, in an apparent attempt to link the doctrine of prayer to Edwards.44 Jonathan Edwards, however, need not be the source for such a claim — a search on Google Books regarding the “natural man” and “prayer” will show that this same idea was discussed fairly often in the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries. The Book of Mormon here is reflecting a common theological belief of Joseph Smith’s time.
The First Vision
Jonathan Neville quotes five separate sermons by Jonathan Edwards that he believes Joseph studied. Each of these sermons quotes from James 1:5, and Neville implies that reading these sermons led Joseph to pray in the sacred grove.45 A much more likely scenario is the one described by William Smith: after hearing a preacher at a revival camp quote James 1:5, Joseph was so deeply moved that he studied it in his Bible as well. Joseph never mentioned Jonathan Edwards’s work throughout his multiple retellings of his sacred theophany.46 Neville also tries to link Joseph’s accounts of the First Vision to Jonathan Edwards’s conversion to Christ, although many of the details that Neville emphasizes constitute an amalgamation of separate accounts from Joseph (such as going to tell his father).47 There are stronger analogies with many who sought salvation in Joseph’s historical setting, and many scholars have discussed various aspects of these. If Neville must have parallels that instigated Joseph’s spiritual quest, these are far more plausible than the one he offers.48
The Temple Endowment
Neville asserts that “The biblical ‘god of this world’ (2 Corinthians 4:4) is not explicitly connected with Satan in the Bible, but Edwards links the two [in a previously cited sermon]. Many Latter-day Saints are familiar with this connection as well.”49 Neville is referring to Latter-day Saints who have been through the temple and there made sacred covenants with God. Biblical language is used when making these covenants, including biblical titles, and Neville goes beyond the evidence in concluding that Edwards is the source for Latter-day Saints linking Satan with the “god of this world.”
[Page 75]As we read further in the scriptural reference cited by Neville, Paul does expand on the role of the “god of this world” by stating that this figure deceives others into rejecting the Gospel. It is not a leap in logic to assume this can only be referring to Satan, and it is not a title Edwards was the first to connect with Satan — anyone who reads the verse would immediately recognize who Paul was describing. For example, Martin Luther said:
The devil knows the thoughts of the ungodly, for he inspires them therewith. … And St Paul says: “The god of this world blindeth the minds of them that believe not, lest the light of the glorious gospel of Christ, who is the image of God, should shine unto them,” etc. And Christ gives a reason how it comes to pass, … where he says: “The devil cometh, and taketh the Word out of their hearts, lest they should believe, and be saved.” Therefore it is no marvel that the devil, through his prophets, declares what shall happen and come to pass. 50
Again, Edwards is in theory a possible source for the idea, but the idea itself can hardly be evidence that Edwards was the source. Why not Luther? Or why not the most obvious person of all — Paul himself?
Christ Clothed in Glory
Neville states that the description of Christ clothed in glory in D&C 99 is a direct connection to Jonathan Edwards’s description of Christ that combined multiple scriptures to create a single statement.51 However, the idea of Christ being “clothed in glory” would be easily found in the Bible itself, and the phrase predates Joseph Smith’s birth when applied to Christ.52 D&C 99 does not necessitate that a single scripture or source — if any — be responsible for that exact description. This is another weak connection easily dismissed.
The Age of the Earth
Neville appears to take a literalist approach to D&C 77:6, stating that Bishop Usher’s chronology (cited by Jonathan Edwards) that places the creation at 4000 BC is in agreement with the revelations of Joseph Smith.53 However, it is possible that even Joseph Smith did not take a literalist approach. John S. Lewis points out how William W. Phelps believed the seven thousand years mentioned in D&C 77 to be referring to God’s time, where a thousand earth years are a day to the Lord, as discussed in 1 Peter and the Book of Abraham.54 The point is moot for our purposes [Page 76]— as Neville demonstrates, the conception of a seven-thousand-year earth goes back to at least Bishop Usher (who died in 1656) and was a commonplace Christian notion by Joseph’s era. Even if D&C 77 is to be interpreted literally, Joseph does not need Edwards for the idea.
Book of Mormon Geography
Neville quotes one instance of Edwards referring to a convergence of streams as the head of a river, believing this can be compared to Joseph Smith and the Book of Mormon. Neville asserts that the Mississippi River is the river Sidon, and so the head of the river Sidon cannot be the source of the river to fit it into his geography.55 However, it is also important to consider how the Book of Mormon defines the head of a river: 1 Nephi 8:14 clearly describes the head of a river as its source. While it is not out of the question for other uses to intend head to mean a convergence of rivers, it is a stretch to say Edwards had any influence on Joseph’s view of Book of Mormon geography.56 Neville also erroneously links Oliver’s mission to the Lamanites with a mission that Edwards took to the Native Americans, believing there to be a connection between the two without providing any substantial support for the idea.57 Some European colonists had been preaching to the Native Americans since their arrival. Joseph did not need Edwards to come up with the notion.
The Urim and Thummim
Neville writes, “Perhaps Joseph was influenced by comments Jonathan Edwards made [regarding the biblical Urim and Thummim] of his ideas and insights that he drew upon for his sermons and treatises,” but Edwards had nothing new to contribute to the discussion that could be found outside the Bible, simply pointing out that the Urim and Thummim were used by the High Priest to commune with God before it was lost.58 Neville also tries to link this description to D&C 130 regarding a white stone and the earth becoming a Urim and Thummim — but there are no clear connections that can reasonably be drawn from Edwards in this regard.59
Plural Marriage
Neville attempts to connect the institution of plural marriage by Joseph Smith to some writings of Edwards. In addition to Joseph Smith’s study and inspired revision of the Old Testament, Neville says,
Another possible factor [that led to the revelation on plural marriage] could be the publication of a 10-volume collection [Page 77]of Edwards’ works by his grandson, Sereno Edwards Dwight, in 1830. That collection included Edwards’ thoughts about the polygamy as a type of the Church in the latter days. Whether that played a role or not is unknown at this point, but it’s interesting to consider.60
We note Neville’s method. He presents a possible link, admits there is no evidence and then declares it “interesting to consider.” There are many things that are interesting to consider — including Middle Earth and the land of Oz. But our interest or consideration do not create evidence from thin air.
Neville then summarized Edwards’s thoughts on the matter as follows, before citing selected writings:
Jonathan Edwards saw Solomon’s many wives as a type of Christ’s church in the latter days, which would have a “multitude” of souls and nations “espoused” to Christ. He also suggested that Solomon was exempt from the law of Moses because the Lord sought to make him unlike other kings of his day.61
However, latter-day revelations received by Joseph contradicts what Edwards had proposed. Jacob 2 and D&C 132 make it clear that Solomon was not exempt from the Law of Moses and broke the law of the king recorded in Deuteronomy 17. Of the patriarchs and prophets spoken of in D&C 132, only David and Solomon are spoken of in a negative light for having multiplied wives to themselves (see Deuteronomy 17:17). Due to the significant contradictions between Edwards’s writings and prophetic revelations, Edwards is an unlikely source for the institution of plural marriage in this dispensation. If mentioning an idea is enough to be credited as Joseph’s source — even if Joseph concludes precisely the opposite of what the source says — then anyone and everyone could be a source.
The Fires of Hell
Neville argues that Joseph’s ideas of hell being mental anguish are similar to Edwards’s views, but Joseph’s revelations and theology go in completely different directions. Just as with plural marriage, Joseph discusses a concept common to most Christians, and draws a conclusion diametrically opposed to Edwards — and yet we are told Edwards is the “likely source.”62 Joseph revealed a finite hell and a grand view of heaven [Page 78]for all of God’s children save the sons of perdition, something decidedly lacking in Edwards’s sermons.
Neville even accuses Brigham Young of painting a caricature of many Christians for believing in an infinite hell, claiming, “no one claims everyone is going to hell forever,” while he misreads Brigham Young’s context of the sinful persons — for whom an eternal hell is a widely held belief in many Christian sects.63 Neville continues by saying Brigham’s “caricature” “clearly doesn’t reflect the teachings of Jonathan Edwards, who emphasized repentance and faith in Christ as the deliverance from hell.”64
In fact, not only did many teach an eternal hell65 (which Neville denies, stating instead that Edwards saw the fires of hell as a sort of mental anguish) but Edwards himself did so in no uncertain terms. He was at pains to foreclose any suggestion that eternal punishment meant anything except an infinite suffering that continued forever with no relief. He also certainly does not confine the torments to the mental realm:
The misery of the wicked in hell will be absolutely eternal. … The other opinion which I mean to oppose is that though the punishment of the wicked shall consist in sensible misery, yet it shall not be absolutely eternal, but only of a very long continuance. … As the future punishment of the wicked consists in sensible misery, so it shall not only continue for a very long time, but shall be absolutely without end. …
Do but consider what it is to suffer extreme torment forever and ever: to suffer it day and night from one year to another, from one age to another, and from one thousand ages to another (and so adding age to age, and thousands to thousands), in pain, in wailing and lamenting, groaning and shrieking, and gnashing your teeth — with your souls full of dreadful grief and amazement, [and] with your bodies and every member full of racking torture; without any possibility of getting ease; without any possibility of moving God to pity by your cries; without any possibility of hiding yourselves from him; without any possibility of diverting your thoughts from your pain; without any possibility of obtaining any manner of mitigation, or help, or change for the better.66
Edwards’s teachings regarding hell clearly have but a tangential connection to Joseph’s revelations of hell and heaven.67 Neville does not [Page 79]cite any instance of Edwards teaching that this faith and repentance could be exercised after death, whereas latter-day revelation clarifies and expands upon the principles of salvation for the dead mentioned briefly in the New Testament (making Joseph’s revelations, in my mind, much more significant than anything Edwards had to say on the matter). In life, there is no question among most Christians that faith and repentance do save us from hell, but most believe that this must be done before one is sent to hell. There is little to convince the reader that Edwards maintained the near universalist view of salvation found in the Doctrine and Covenants.
Proposed Intertextuality Between Jonathan Edwards
and the Book of Mormon
Neville proposes a heavy intertextuality between the Book of Mormon and the writings of Edwards, and includes a lengthy list of proposed non-biblical words and phrases in Appendices 2 and 3 that Neville traces back to Edwards.68 Having looked through these lists, I have found numerous errors. I found over sixty words that have a biblical root in the first two pages alone, whether it is through a spelling variation (aught/ ought) or a change in the tense of the verb. Neville previously listed various scriptures that he argues may have been influenced by Jonathan Edwards or James Hervey as well, although all of the connections he draws are superficial and do not necessitate any outside influence (for example, the use of the word “farewell” is unlikely to reflect any theologian’s writings).69
Some words and phrases constitute a significant portion of Neville’s argument, and so I will respond to some of these in more depth below. It becomes clear to the careful reader, however, that Neville fails to deliver any convincing argument for the intertextuality he proposes, while even misrepresenting his sources to create more “evidence.” Since these are his strongest cases on which he spends the most effort, the reader is right to conclude the others are even worse.
Infinite Goodness
Neville derives the name of his book from King Benjamin’s sermon in Mosiah 5, as well as from some remarks by Edwards. However, his approach is fatally flawed insofar as he will either allow this phrase to be either from an outside source or the Bible. Even if Joseph had taken this phrase from an outside source, Neville admits that Edwards “was not the only, and was not even the first, Christian author to use the phrase.”70 If [Page 80]this is so, then the argument is useless — it cannot be anything but weak proof for his claim.71
Neville shows that even Edwards used it only 55 times in his writings.72 It would be a stretch, even if Joseph did read the entire eight-volume set of Edwards’s teachings, for the prophet to find and internalize these uses in the limited time he had to read (once a week at the Palmyra print shop while trying to dodge the face-blackening printers).
A far more likely outside influence, assuming such an influence exists, is instead the Christian ministers who preached at the revival meetings Joseph attended during his youth. Edwards was, after all, an influential American theologian, and his writings were widely published. Joseph, however, was not the one who would have read extensively from Edwards.
The Sin of the World
Here Neville has misused his sources to impose his own personal worldview on the scriptures. Citing a paper by Nicholas J. Frederick in the Journal of Book of Mormon Studies, Neville claims that Frederick misquotes scripture to fit his needs.
The citation Neville takes issue with is as follows:
Wherefore I would that ye should remember that I have spoken unto you concerning that prophet which the Lord showed unto me that should baptize the Lamb of God, which should take away the sin of the world. (2 Nephi 31:4)
The next day John seeth Jesus coming unto him, and saith, Behold the Lamb of God, which taketh away the sin of the world. (John 1:29)73
As Frederick noted earlier in his paper,74 he was citing Royal Skousen’s The Book of Mormon: The Earliest Text. It tells us that 2 Nephi 31:4 differs from other printed editions of the Book of Mormon by pluralizing “sin” to “sins.” Skousen notes in his analysis of textual variants:
Here in 2 Nephi 31:4, the 1830 typesetter changed the singular sin to sins. Yet this passage is virtually identical to the language in John 1:29…The singular sin is appropriate here. The text underwent the same change from sin to sins earlier in 1 Nephi [10:10] … Oliver Cowdery is responsible for the change to sins in 1 Nephi 10:10; in the printer’s manuscript, he added the s later with heavier ink flow. The original manuscript is extant for 1 Nephi 10:10 and it reads sin.75
[Page 81]However, despite Frederick’s faithful representation of what the Book of Mormon’s earliest text says, Neville ignores all this and naively claims that Frederick has misquoted the Book of Mormon:
Frederick misquotes 2 Nephi 31:4. The verse actually reads “which should take away the sins of the world…”
The distinction is significant. If we assume Joseph Smith was redacting the New Testament, we are left to speculate why Joseph would have essentially misquoted John throughout the Book of Mormon and Doctrine and Covenants…
If we expand our study to non-biblical sources, we find possible sources for Joseph Smith’s usage…
Edwards also referred to “the sins of the world” several times.76
If Neville had read Frederick’s references, he would have known that Frederick was not citing from the 1830, or even 2013, edition of the Book of Mormon, and he could have accessed Skousen’s widely accessible work to confirm Frederick’s reading. Even if the scripture had originally read “sins of the world,” it would be strange to say that Joseph Smith could not make the phrase plural of his own accord without the use of Edwards as inspiration.
We here see Neville’s method in full flower — he misunderstands the argument being made, does not engage with well-known scholarly tools and literature, becomes aggressive and dismissive to those who disagree with him, and ends by drawing an utterly unwarranted conclusion. This is the entire book, in miniature.
Redemption Cometh in and Through the Holy Messiah
Neville argues that Edwards talked about redemption being connected with the Messiah over 100 times, so the Book of Mormon must be reflecting this idea from Edwards.77 However, Messiah is simply a title that means Anointed One and is the equivalent of Christ in Greek — so it is hardly novel that Joseph believed redemption came through Jesus the Messiah, nor would it be a stretch to believe that the Nephites believed the same thing. (Given that the Nephites predated Greek, the use of Messiah may more literally reflect their language.)
Moreover, the Old Testament clearly connects the Messiah with redemption and deliverance throughout the Psalms, even if the King James Version translates it as “anointed one.” This is clearly [Page 82]a biblical idea that in no way requires Edwards to be an influence on the text.
Wrestle Before God
Neville states that any idea of “wrestling with God” is a phrase that most likely originated with Edwards and David Brainerd, rather than the well-known use in Genesis 32. Neville claims biblical intertextuality is “not a good fit because Jacob was not wrestling with God.”78 Neville only cites Genesis 32:24’s description of “a man” who wrestled with Jacob and ignores the rest of the chapter that does teach that this man was either the Lord or the angel of the Lord. Jacob goes so far as to name the place “Peniel” — “face of God” (Genesis 32:31). Genesis 32 thus does ultimately claim that the wrestle is with God, making it an appropriate scriptural story for Nephite prophets.
Neville also only mentions Alma 8:10, avoiding the well-known story in Enos who clearly did connect his wrestle before God with Jacob at Peniel before he received a remission of his sins.79 Alma, then, would have had Jacob’s and Enos’s experiences to draw from in his own description of wrestling before God.
Endure to the End
Neville claims that “endure to the end” is a non-biblical phrase adopted from Edwards, contrasted with the biblical “endure unto the end” in Mark 13:13.80 However, “endure to the end” is also a phrase employed in the New Testament, such as in Matthew 10:22, and is entirely synonymous with “endure unto the end” which makes this a poor argument for Neville to make from any standpoint. It is also a phrase that occurs extensively in Early Modern English texts, showing this phrase does not require Edwards’s insertion to the text.81
The Natural Man Is an Enemy to God
Neville says that 1 Corinthian’s 2:14’s use of the “natural man” who “receives not the things of the Spirit” offers “little or no insight” to the phrase’s use in the Book of Mormon. Because of this, Neville claims that “non-biblical textuality takes us to Jonathan Edwards and deeply enriches the text. By invoking Edwards, Joseph Smith provided us a key to a more profound and meaningful experience not just with the text, but with God.”82 However, while Neville simplistically links 1 Corinthians 2:14 strictly with knowledge, he fails to take the whole passage into context — knowledge of things of the Spirit. Paul’s description fits perfectly [Page 83]with King Benjamin’s description of the natural man, making Edwards a forced and unnecessary addition to the text. Neville attempts to strengthen his connection to Edwards in Mosiah 3:19 by citing Edwards’s list of various traits the spiritual man should have, but most of the traits listed do not appear in the Book of Mormon, making the connection weak and superficial.83 Here we should ask, “If Joseph is cribbing from Edwards, why does he ignore such a useful list?” In assessing an author’s influence on another, we must look at “unparallels” as well as supposed “parallels.”84
Neville also claims that James 4:4’s use of “enemy of God” is completely different from the phrase “enemy to God” found in the Book of Mormon.85 However, the context suggests that it is an objective genitive, which means that “enemy to God” is an appropriate translation of the Greek. The ideas are identical. James and Benjamin were discussing the same idea, being an enemy to God, and Edwards is a forced addition to the text. A brief look through Google Books will also show that Edwards was not the only person to connect the natural man with an enemy to God, further demonstrating Neville’s forced insertion of Edwards into the text.
Forever and Ever
Neville claims that the phrase “forever and ever” is a phrase distinct from the Bible’s “for ever and ever.” Edwards, however, used both, so he may have influenced the text of the Book of Mormon.86 However, the phrases are identical in meaning and would simply reflect scribal/ translator preference. There is no reason to suppose any outside source was needed for the Book of Mormon.
Preparatory State
Neville argues that the theology of a preparatory state comes from Edwards, but Edwards’s “preparatory state” is his description of the period from the Fall of Adam and Eve to the birth of Christ.87 The Book of Mormon, however, speaks of a mortal probation for us to prepare ourselves to meet God. The two have a superficial connection, but the theology of Edwards and the Book of Mormon diverge drastically upon closer examination.
Broken Heart and Contrite Spirit
Neville argues that the phrase “a broken heart and contrite spirit” comes from Edwards, but both the Bible and latter-day revelations refer to both [Page 84]the heart and the spirit with both adjectives.88 A broken heart is a contrite heart, and a contrite spirit is a broken spirit. Those who know the bible as well as Neville claims that young Joseph did know that Psalms 34:18 includes both in clear parallel: “The Lord is nigh unto them that are of a broken heart; and saveth such as be of a contrite spirit.” The phrase “a broken heart and a contrite spirit” was used before 1620,89 including twice by John Bunyan in 1691 under a revealing title: The Acceptable Sacrifice: or the Excellency of a Broken Heart: Shewing the Nature, Signs, and Proper Effects of a Contrite Spirit.90 The Book of Mormon’s “broken heart and contrite spirit” dates to at least 1615.91 It was likely a common expression in Joseph’s time, which is why Edwards and Joseph used it.92
Come Unto Christ
Jesus says “come unto me” (Matthew 11:28), but when Moroni talks about it in the third person as a command “come unto Christ,” Neville argues Joseph must have received the phrase from Edwards.93 This is a poor argument since both verses offer the same doctrine, just told in different voices. The phrase is also used in dozens of works found in a quick Google Books search between the dates of 1800–1820. The University of Michigan’s free EEBO database for Early Modern English likewise shows hundreds of occurrences of this phrase being used, showing it was not unique to Edwards or Joseph.94 In fact, one such usage has “invite them, together with us, to come unto Christ.”95
Clear as the Moon
Neville argues that Joseph Smith did not quote the Song of Solomon in the Doctrine and Covenants — he quoted Edwards quoting the Song of Solomon.96 Joseph Smith, however, was likely aware of the contents of the Song of Solomon by 1836 as he learned Hebrew — he would later quote from the Song of Solomon in the 1840s,97 and the name Nauvoo is based on a rare word in the Hebrew Bible that appears only once in Isaiah and the Song of Solomon. It is doubtful that Joseph truly was dependent on Edwards for these inclusions. Once again, the story changes to support Neville’s claims — Joseph must know the Bible extremely well, except when it would be better for the theory if Jonathan Edwards knew it.
Son of Righteousness
Neville believes that “Son of Righteousness” in 3 Nephi 25:2 is the correct spelling (rather than “sun,” as it appears in Malachi 4:2) and that Joseph Smith saw this as an error in the Bible and was referring to [Page 85]sermons by Edwards.98 However, there is no indication that Joseph ever attempted to alter this verse in his inspired revision, and a scribal error is more likely. It would be easy to hear “sun” but write “son.” Joseph likely saw no need to correct this in later editions of the Book of Mormon because “Son of Righteousness” and “Sun of Righteousness” are each adequate titles for Jesus Christ, the only begotten son of God and the light of the world. In any case, Joseph hardly needs Edwards to point out that “sun” and “son” sound identical.99
Arise from the Dust
Neville argues that the phrase “arise from the dust,” a quotation from Isaiah, is more likely from Edwards.100 However, it is clear for serious readers of the Book of Mormon that the Nephite prophets clearly adopt this language from Isaiah, and all use it in the same way, reflecting a thorough knowledge of the ancient Old World understanding of rising from the dust as a symbol of enthronement/empowerment and covenant keeping. The Book of Mormon uses this language in profound ways when modern biblical scholarship is considered, showing a level of depth and sophistication far beyond what one could have gained from consulting Jonathan Edwards.101 Once more, Joseph’s biblical knowledge flags just when Neville needs it to.
Gathered Together in One
Neville argues that “gathered together in one” is a non-biblical phrase, even though “gather together in one” is biblical (Ephesians 1:10).102 Neville is apparently willing to allow Edwards to use a verb in multiple tenses but unwilling to allow Joseph Smith or the Book of Mormon prophets the same freedom.
Father of Lies
Neville argues that the title “father of lies” is Edwardsian, although it is an entirely biblical concept that does not require Edwards.103 John 8:44 states that Satan is a “liar, and the father of it [i.e., lies].” It is not a leap in logic to believe a prophet could adopt that title and clarify the meaning. This is evident by Martin Luther, who called the devil the father of all lies long before Jonathan Edwards:
When that envious, poisoned spirit, the devil, plagues and torments us, as is his custom, by reason of our sins, intending to lead us into despair, me must meet him in this manner: “thou deceitful and wicked spirit! How darest thou [Page 86]to presume to persuade me to such things? Knowest thou not that Christ Jesus, my Lord and Savior, who crushed thy head, has forbidden me to believe thee, yea, even when thou speakest the truth, in that he names thee a murderer, a liar, and the father of lies.”104
Zion
Neville claims the New Testament never mentions Zion, but the Greek form “Sion” is used repeatedly. He attempts to link this to Edwards’s teachings that “mount Zion is a type (or symbol) of the Church of Christ.”105 However, this concept is not necessarily drawn from Edwards, as Hebrews 12:22–23 speaks of Zion as entering the company of angels and the “church of the firstborn.” Christians in the Early Modern English era likewise used Mount Zion as a symbol much like Edwards did, basing their arguments out of the Bible.106 Zion and its Greek form Sion are easily connected.
Hebraism, or Edwards?
Neville writes,
Another well-known feature of the Book of Mormon is parallelism, including chiasmus and other forms of repetition. Edwards effectively used such parallel structures to convey his messages because much of his work was written for public speaking. …
While interesting and relevant, an in-depth comparison between Edwards’ literary techniques and the Book of Mormon is beyond the scope of this book.107
Neville appears to believe that Hebraisms in the Book of Mormon, including some of the most common Hebraic forms of poetry, are not in the Book of Mormon because it is a text from a Hebrew people who fled Jerusalem, but because Edwards purportedly used similar methods while preaching. (Neville offers no evidence to support this claim, however.) This is a dangerously incorrect assumption that shoehorns Edwards into the text and risks clouding the nature of an inherently Hebraic text.
Other Wrongly Attributed Phrases
A few other phrases or words Neville wrongly attributes to Edwards’s influence stand out as worthy of mention.
[Page 87]For example, Neville attempts to draw a distinction between “towards” in place of “toward,” even though they are synonymous. Neville even demonstrates through his citations of Edwards that Edwards used both words synonymously, and there is little reason to believe Joseph’s choice was influenced by Edwards.108
Neville similarly includes “having had” as a verb form found in Edwards and minimally in the Bible, assuming that Joseph Smith could only learn this conjugation of the verb from him.109 He also argues that verbs such as “grasped” come from Edwards’s reading of a Hebrew phrase, unaware that the hiphil form of hzk in Hebrew is translated as “grasp” and would not require Edwards’s reading to appear in the Book of Mormon.110 (It also seems a stretch to insist that Joseph — who knew English at least as well as he knew the Bible — was incapable of using a common English verb in a variety of tenses.)
Neville similarly argues that phrases such as “strait and narrow” or “straight and narrow” originate from Edwards’s writings, even though it is a biblical phrase that may have been misspelled by Joseph’s scribes.111 Neville also claims the phrase “sandy foundation” originated with Edwards, even though it reflects a biblical idea (e.g., Matthew 7:26) and Edwards was not the first to use this paraphrase.112 One prominent example is from William Penn, a Quaker and the namesake of the Quaker colony of Pennsylvania, who was confined to the tower of London in 1668 for writing a religious pamphlet called The Sandy Foundation Shaken. This work was repeatedly republished in nineteenth-century America.113
The Proposed Use of Additional Outside Sources
in the Translation
In addition to Edwards, Neville proposes that Joseph relied on other books for his translation of the Book of Mormon. Many critics of the Church have appealed to these books as putative sources for the Book of Mormon, in an attempt to discredit the Book of Mormon and the restored gospel. Incredibly, Neville even asserts that “faithful scholars rejected the very evidence developed by the skeptics that supports Joseph’s claim that he translated the plates. Instead, they have adopted a theory that Joseph was merely reading words that appeared on the [Urim and Thummim] or seer stone.”114 As with his supposed connections to Edwards, however, Neville offers only superficial evidence that cannot be taken seriously.
For example, he argues that among the sources Joseph had read and drew upon, he was intimately familiar with The Late War, The First Book of Napoleon, The American Revolution, and The First Book [Page 88]of the American Chronicles of the Times. Neville claims these sources were used for military terms found in the Book of Mormon, but most are single common words such as “surrounded” or “rehearsed.”115 Single words such as these cannot be seriously linked to any outside source, as it would presume Joseph was incapable of hearing or learning them in any other way.
Perhaps the weakest argument Neville could make regarding The Late War and the Book of Mormon is that “In both cases, we have a Title Page, a Copyright Page, and a Preface.”116 Because both books have these features, including the eleven witnesses, which he compares to scholarly endorsements for The Late War, Neville sees a connection between the two that is entirely imagined. If he is so desperate for parallels that these will do, it says much about even the author’s assessment of how convincing his case really is.117
Neville similarly argues that Lucy Mack Smith’s late retelling of Joseph Sr.’s dream influenced Joseph’s language, but the reverse may also be true — that is, she adapted language from the Book of Mormon in her retelling of Joseph Sr.’s dream years after it had occurred.118 This scenario is much more likely.119 Although Joseph’s family doubtless influenced his language, this example cannot bear the load that Neville places upon it.
Conclusion
While Joseph Smith surely was influenced by the language of his time — after all, “the Lord God giveth light unto the understanding; for he speaketh unto men according to their language, unto their understanding” (2 Nephi 31:3) — Neville makes far too many unsubstantiated claims and bases his arguments on far too many implausible suppositions to be taken seriously. Even his best suggestions are weak — they consist of phrases common in the religious literature and discourses of three centuries.120 There is no clear evidence linking distinctive language in the Book of Mormon to books written or published around Joseph Smith’s time, nor can Neville demonstrate a clear connection to Edwards’s writings. And, lest we forget, this entire shaky edifice is constructed on a sandy foundation — Neville has provided only a just-so story to convince us that Joseph even had contact with Edwards’s in-depth theological treaties to begin with.
Infinite Goodness is a poor book to add to any Latter-day Saint’s library because of its many historical inaccuracies. It is further weakened by its continued insistence on his Demonstration Hypothesis, which claims that Joseph Smith merely feigned translation by reciting Isaiah from [Page 89]memory, despite the textual and historical evidence to the contrary.121 It also serves as a poor model of how to do history, how to argue honesty, and even the use of logic. It is a pseudo-historical work that gives undue credence to many attacks originally formulated by critics of the Church regarding the origins of the Book of Mormon, and its arguments can be devastating to faith for unprepared members of the Church who do not know beforehand the claims made within. We can only debate whether its effect on the reader will be worse because of the false ideas it teaches, or because of the dreadful example that it sets.
[Author’s Note: I would like to thank Mike Parker and Gregory L. Smith for reviewing an earlier draft of this review and offering helpful suggestions, as well as my other family and friends (especially my father) who helped edit and offer clarifying remarks. I would also like to thank the pseudonymous “Peter Pan” who offered encouragement as I wrote this review.]
121. Neville offers a brief review of his Demonstration Hypothesis in Neville, Infinite Goodness, 315–17. For my review of this hypothesis, see Kraus, “An Unfortunate Approach,” 1–62.
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